Reviews
I greatly admire those who can say in a few words what takes me many to say. This is a true blessing, a true gift. And this is a true journey, within these few words. Thank you.
I loved the imagery here. Well done.
I thought the beginning of this poem had some really cool images in it. I’ve read through a few of your poems and I think that you have like a staccato way of writing that allows your interesting structure of words to really be shown clear. Keep writing!
Liked the innocence incorporated here simple but full of life.
I am not sure whether this is deadly serious or seriously comic; whether it is about a motor bike, a car (my first choice) or peanut butter sandwiches! But whatever it is, and whether I am currently deluded – I enjoyed the ride – immensely!
Equally powerful self-control as the poem is powerful! I wonder if the perpetrator was aware of the self-control.
Good images with subtle suggestive stream.
Lost underground with a blacksmith/wordsmith/black bear forging Spanish dogshoes – where am I? In the Métro? Intriguing excellence!
Nice Lines… short and meaningful Great!
Your poems are very good, there different kind of sensual but fast moving which is hard to do good job.
